My first PC video that  is my first video. I would like anyone else who makes videos to give me any advice or things like that. Thank you in advance and I hope you enjoy.

Put some music quietly in the background to get rid of some of that noise and pick a song with no words. Also speed up the video. It was kinda slow. If its slow people will get bored. and you could make yourself a little bigger. Also just be a little more up beat, you are doing great but you dont have the energy of someone who is really really excited to show you what they are presenting us.

Thank you very much. :)