Looking for criticism

Hi I'm here to see what the tek community thinks of my web site...

Yes I am Canadian
This site I've been working on was all self taught. with the help of the internet...
The greatest informal tool ever created!!!

www.patpro.ca

I have no sales yet of my book
Not a Single Lie

I was wondering is some people here would like me to Give it for free??? let me know and I will keep updating this Topic!!

1) Enter is too big... not needed > you should get rid of it ~ my eyes bleed.
2) After entering site my eyes bleed even more.
this swinging from left to right is causing me to bleed.

3) Colors are not particularly good (easy on eyes)

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I'm confused.

Are you trolling, or you being serious?

Yesss YESSS bleed !!! lol thanks

If had some friends tell my they like the bleeding are you special?

Im looking for honest opinions on site design and only bothering people that want to help me..

Ohh.....

Well..

  1. Kill the Enter thing.
  2. Get rid of what ever the fuck this shit is:


(Referring to the moving stuff)
3. Kill the background. Go with something less flashy.
4.

NO. NO. NEVER AGAIN. MOVING LOGOS ARE BAD.
5. All of your paragraphs need to be in a different format. Set them up on different pages based on context.
6. Get a real head shot done. Even if you do it by your self. This one screams unprofessional.


7. These buttons need to be fixed:


8. Let me know if you want this redone. I'll gladly build you a quick one.

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is this background what you say this is too flashy?
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8Vjqn9zdTgpcjhoVmplUXp3RWs

Yes. I'm not sure who your target audience is, but even the most metal headed people I know would wince at that background.

And I thought I had a good thing here...

you say you can help? how would I get that...

Please do!!! XD finally

Give me about 2 days. I build on a different platform, but I do need conformation that I can use your assets. Are you good with that? Open up a PM thread with me.