Hi, first off I AM NOT just trying to get views by advertising my channel here. All I want is one or two people to take a look at my video, and give me some advice on how I can improve.
Things I already know:
- Some mistakes with facts
- Crappy voice quality
- Boring voice
The video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuHLRSNWB3Y
Also, which would be better? Post commentary or commentary as I play? I know that with post commentary I can use notes effectively and get more information across.
All advice is helpful. Be as brutal as you like. I love video games and computers and I hope someday to make a career out of one, if not both of them, so be honest.
I do have about 5 more parts recorded, but if I have to I can restart it and do it again with post commentary and better sound.