Advice and suggestions for Laptop Video overwiew

Hello, i’m trying to make some video for specific laptops.
What do you think about this?

Is the pacing ok? I know the volume it’s a bit louder, but i will change it.

I dont care as long as volume doesnt peak to cap

Then regarding these videos, I really dont want these specs to be split out like this, and more you can squeeze together the better, aka to 1 page

For transitions, thats your taste, I like Star Wars :man_shrugging:t2:

Then if this last slide really means whats it saying, …I really dont want to come over this site to browse more details and specs, I’m coming there to buy it …after checking pricing from places, and so that site should probably also be there :wink:

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Thanks for your advice, I think you are right, I should display maybe an end card with information of where to buy it.